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Saturday, April 8, 2017

Meet The Books! - Anwynne's Adventures, a.k.a., The Pain Of A Memory

So... I was gone a good while... again. But I do have an excuse! (of course) :P So, you remember how I got sick? Well, I had to go to the hospital for it, so thus my not-blogging and not-answering is explained... I hope. I do harbor the wish that you guys can forgive it (but, really, this is the best excuse I've ever had). Anyways, though, setting that aside, I'm back now. Back to give you another Meet The Books! feature! Yay! And, this time, with a book titled the rather stale title of Anwynne's Adventures at the moment. But that will soon change, as you'll see... :)

What is the genre?
The genre is absolutely, positively Action/Adventure (listen to the title!). I don't think there was ever even a chance of it being something else (except maybe Fantasy).
What is the title? Time period?
The title that is on the document currently is Anwynne's Adventures. However, come April, a new scape starts. I will join in on Camp NaNo (yes, you guys are probably laughing at my unintelligence after my fiasco with normal NaNo), and I am re-writing the beginning of this story, and first-drafting a great portion of it under a new title, The Pain Of A Memory. So, stay tuned as to updates on that. ;) And the time period is another medieval (hey, it's my favorite to write in!).
How is it written (Point of view, MC, etc)?
I wrote it in my favorite POV, that being third person limited (I just about never write in any other POV). But it's MC various, having at least three regular MCs that have already entered, and one that hasn't. However, the actual writing is very unusual. It's written in an odd format that I really don't have a name for. It kind-of zones in and out of different places at different times in one sequence, as if all four scenarios were happening at once, in order, while they're really in different times and places, and with different people (but the four scenarios will all eventually connect and make sense as having relevance to each other). I guess one thing to call it would be a flashback-present-sequence. Hahahaha... :P
Who are the characters?
This one also has a fairly large cast, and all in different times, places, and scenes, so I'm going to introduce them in the order that they're met in.
Princess Anwynne is a snappy-tempered queen-to-be, whom is found at the beginning of the story to be on her way to wed the prince of a foreign country, Nistria, for an inter-kingdom alliance with her parent's country, Ingrecia. She struggles with not only with going away from home, but also with remaining human and considerate in these new countries of strange things. While she doesn't really care either way about the marriage, she is missing home, and her only friends are now quite officially below her rank-wise on her journey. She looks rather unique, with almost white-blond wavy hair, fair skin, and aquamarine eyes.
Maid Elystra is Anwynne's lady-in-waiting/companion, and also a young woman of relatively high birth, being the daughter of a now-deceased knight and lady. She is very submissive, and is one of a set of twins who are in Anwynne's escort to Nistria, the other being her brother, Captain Errius. The twins were really Anwynne's only friends at home, and now that she is a queen-to-be, both are quite below her in rank (even more so than before). However, Elystra continues to be Anwynne's friend on the long journey, fearful and timid though she is. Elystra has silvery eyes, sleek, black, almost fairy-like, long hair, and extremely fair skin.
Except for the short, curly hair, this looks just like Elystra.
Captain Errius du Regiina was given the surname 'du Regiina' in place of his true one when he was appointed as captain of the royal guard for the princess. As captain of her royal escort to Nistria, the title, meaning 'Of the Queen', seemed fitting. He is the twin brother of Maid Elystra, and the best soldier that Ingrecia has. Errius' devotion to his country is on a level of extremity, and his devotion to Anwynne, as once his princess, and a royal-born of the same country, is immense. Errius is basically a figure of patriotism, and love of one's countrymen, if figured down to his greatest virtue. He also has quite the trait of determination. Once a certain event happen jeopardizing the journey, and Princess Anwynne is put in distress due to it, Errius tries again, and again, and again, and again to lift the situation. A real trooper, to be sure. ;) Even for being Elystra's twin, though, Errius looks absolutely nothing like his sister, with chocolate-brown hair, and warmer gray eyes. However, he is the spitting image of someone completely different...
Captain Orlando Rogan is a Belestinian bandit-captain, who in the beginning of the story finds out about Anwynne's party and is set on capturing it. He has been raiding parties going to or coming from Nistria through the middle country, Belestine, for some years now, but for some reason doesn't raid other parties. An unusual bandit, with a repulsion to blood and injuries, a preference to who he robs, a shifting character, and a decided dislike for Nistria, he's hard to figure out. He has honey-ish-colored hair of a shorter cut, and brown, cat-like eyes. He is the only bandit named (at the beginning, at least) of the Silver Forest Bandits.
Sir "Echo" Torriven is the first - and, so far, only - character of consequence met in scenario #2 of this story's different scapes/times/places. He is a lesser knight (one of common or foreign blood) in Belestine, and lives in a small village with two orphans he calls Ariff (II) and Lania. he was nicknamed 'Echo' by his innkeeper friend, Grant. Echo was a soldier from another country when he was somewhat younger (he's not super old, but hard times have made him seem like he is. He's really only in his late thirties or so, I think. I'll have to ask him). ;) When the war he was fighting for that country  ended years ago, he got stranded in Belestine. He found some orphans of the war, knew they needed him, and so set up a home in Belestine and became a knight to support himself (and the orphans). But, like I said, since he's foreign, even though he has noble blood, he is a lesser knight of Belestine. Echo has a thing about helping people who are stranded, injured, alone, etc., and he has from the beginning of his days. This is why he still hasn't made it back to his country, even after sixteen years: because of Ariff and Orlania (or, as he calls her, Lania). He's got kindly gray eyes that are very warm, and brown hair with a select few silver streaks through it, as well as only one ear (he lost the other when he was a soldier). I did a Beautiful People on Echo earlier this month, here. I am not going to dwell on Grant, or the orphans here because they have very minimal effect on the action of the story as of right now.
Lan is a simple Belestinian soldier in scenario #3, remembering a war in the past and the events that ended it so mysteriously, in order to try and figure something out (shh! Present Lan is not known - you only get to see past Lan in this scenario because present Lan will be the connecter in relevance to scenarios #2 and #1). He a simple soldier, who, because of his best friend's death in the war, is determined to end it, with the help of his friend,
Ariff, who appears in more than one scenario, though by name only in #3 with Lan. As you might guess, Ariff is also a soldier, but of a different type than Lan. In fact, he was fighting in the war, and in it knew Echo (when Echo was a soldier. That's why one of Echo's orphans is named Ariff, after Echo's battle-companion). Ariff has black hair and blue eyes.


And lastly, in a scenario which is merely #1, except in a different place, is
Prince Angelo of Nistria, the young king-to-be whom Anwynne is betrothed to, and a troubled young man as well. Inwardly distressed by many of the chaotic things going on that he doesn't know how to reign over, often he merely secludes himself and solves problems quietly. He has brown hair and brown eyes, and is somewhat tall.

Princess Marcina of Nistria is Angelo's younger sister, often trying to find the source of his troubles, but to little avail. She is very fond of Angelo, and - being herself not afraid to ask things of other people - is much of the time confused by his secluded nature and how he deals with his own duties. It distresses her, and she wants to help him... Marcina looks a good bit like her brother, having brown hair and brown eyes and being rather tall for a girl.
Phew! *wipes forehead* Don't worry, that was all of them. ;) But, I had to make up for the lack of snippets, because I'm not going to put any snippets due to my re-writing it in April. :P
What does the plot consist of?
Well, what's going on consists of a) Anwynne trying to make it with her host to Nistria, *spoilers* getting captured by bandits, and trying to escape. *spoilers end* And then b) Lan's story, being relived by Lan himself in order to try and find something he missed a long time ago. And lastly, c) the knight Echo embarking on a quest for Belestine (spoilers!). Oh, actually, I forgot d) the conflict going with Angelo and his sister, Marcina, and her trying to reach out to him. I know. It's complicated. ;) :P
What is the setting?
A pretty early medieval civilization, composed of many different previously warring kingdoms, trying to get peacefully up on its feet.
Who are the favorite characters in it?
So far among readers, the two favorites are Errius and Echo. My personal favorite might also be Errius (shh! Yes, I know taking favorites is bad when you're the author, but I don't care!).
What is the favorite scene?
So far, the favorite scene consists of a challenge between Errius and Rogan, a duel to determine something. I can't say much more without giving spoilers, but I can say as much as that is the current most favored scene by readers.
Any themes of music for this work?
Yes, of course! :) As always. ;) I like to listen to A Time For Us, by Andy Williams, and a lot of his other tragic-sounding songs, I listen to the 2015 Cinderella soundtrack (I know! It's my go-to writing music, to be sure!). And I think the song If I Can't Love Her, as sung by Thomas Hampson would also be a great writing music for this. But the song Alone, or as Il Divo sings it in Italian, Solo (only Il Divo's version, because any other version totally doesn't fit) just perfectly fits the mood of the story. For some reason, also, Mr. Hampson's singing of The Camps Are Hush'd Today reminds me grimly of Lan's part in this story. And I hope to get a LOT of opera listening in (particularly Thomas Hampson, Beverly Sills, David Miller, Kathleen Battle, of course, Il Divo) while I re-write/first-draft it for Camp NaNo.
Any drawings?
I do have one, single drawing for this story of my personal favorite in it, that is, of Errius. But I'm not sure if I want it to be finished or not, so I don't think I'm going to post it today (but I will post it sooner or later!).
Strong point in story?
The strongest point in the writing is probably all of the many twists and turns that are - like murder mystery twists - anticipatable to Sherlock Holmes or Hercule Poirot, but unnoticed by the reader until they pop in with a glorious bang. Haha, sorry. I'm a little proud of the twists, and I especially like to rub in the fact of them when I know I have readers of the story in my audience who might give their left leg for the knowledge of what these twists are.
Weak point in story?
I would say the weak point is the names. Because the key to figuring out the plot twists is all in the names of certain people, places, and events. If you knew enough and paid enough attention to these, then you wouldn't have to be Sherlock Holmes or Hercule Poirot to figure at least most of them out.
What are your plans for it?
Well, like I said. In Camp NaNo, I'll be using it to rewrite/first-draft Anwynne's Adventures under the new name of The Pain Of A Memory. Other than that, I want to finish it before its one-year anniversary, which is this June, I think.
Any particular writing habits for it?
Well, I cry a lot for this story. Seriously, this one makes me cry almost as much as Alomina, and quite more regularly. And it has yet to make me laugh. Which isn't good. But, needles to say of whether this story is a sad one, I do have a habit of getting into it very intensely.
Bonus question: If it were made into a movie, who would be your ideal movie cast for it?
Ooh! Um... I think I would have Natalie Portman (Thor; Thor: The Dark World) as Princess Anwynne (because she would do the hot-tempered thing great). As for Errius, let's put him down as... Orlando Bloom? (Lord Of The Rings Trilogy; Pirates Of The Carribean Series) Yeah, that's a good default for any male role. Let's have a slightly modified Christian Bale (Dark Knight Trilogy; Newsies) for Rogan, and black-haired Sophia Loren (Houseboat) as Maid Elystra. And then let's have a brown-haired Katherine Jenkins (a mezzo-soprano opera singer) as Princess Marcina (what?! Yes, I know she's not an actress, but she could be!). And, uh... then a much younger Carlos Marin (A Spanish opera singer/Showtunes performer, in Man Of La Mancha; Beauty And The Beast) as Prince Angelo. I might pick Thomas Hampson (a baritone opera singer and stage actor) to play Sir Echo Torriven. And Lan... could be a teenage Christian Bale...? I know, I know! I already used Christian Bale! But, well, he's a good actor! And at least Rogan could be Bale as in The Dark Knight Trilogy, and then Newsies Bale could be Lan. And then I would take the guy who played Elrond in LotR/ Red Skull in Captain America: The First Avenger as Ariff (no, I don't know the actor's name).
See? Look at that face! Natalie Portman would be a great Anwynn! Only, she just needs to be blond is all.


And I think that about wraps the important people up, as well as this post. ;)
What did you think? Would you read this book? Do you think I'm nuts for doing Camp NaNo after I hated ordinary NaNo? Who do you think would be your favorite character in it? Does it sound better than the previous Meet The Books! subjects? I'm afraid I must say farewell, because it's extremely likely you won't see another post until May (unless I have time for Beautiful People in April). Have you listened to Thomas Hampson yet?! (Btw, if you haven't, particularly his version of If I Can't Love Her, then you are a poor, sorry little grape indeed.) And I believe this, and maybe Beautiful People, will be the only post until May.








6 comments:

  1. From what I understand, Camp NaNo is a lot easier than a regular NaNo. I think you can succeed.

    I really like your characters! Captain Errius seems to be my favorite so far, but I need to see more in order to judge.

    BTW Hugo Weaving is the actor who played Red Skull (and I must admit, he plays a good villian).

    Catherine
    catherinesrebellingmuse.blogspot.com

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    1. Yes, it really is! Especially when you start out re-writing (so you don't have to outline, and once you are writing new material, you are alredady on your feet). :)
      Yeah, Errius really is the best (not to take favorites or anything amongst my own ink-and-paper people, you know). ;)
      Haha, yes, Hugo Weaving! That's who I meant, just couldn't recall the name. :P

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  2. This looks so awesome! Do you think maybe you could post an excerpt after Camp NaNo - particularly of Errius? And I promise to check out Thomas Hampson:)

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    1. Thanks! And, yes, I promise that I will post some excerpts (or maybe just the first chapter) once Camp is ended. :) Thank you for the enthusiasm! And don't worry, Errius is in the first two scenes, and after that, in every scene Anwynne is in for a while.
      Yay! Okay, Hope, you have just earned about 100000000 awesome points even for considering Thomas Hampson. Seriously, he is the best baritone soloist you can get when it comes to Broadway/Opera collaboration (I would say the best total, but I ever-so-slightly prefer the tenor, David Miller on a whole).

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  3. Ooh, I love this story! Hee, I can't wait to read more of it. :) Y'know, not to go with the crowd, but I do love Errius. :) And Echo, of course.

    Good luck continuing with Camp NaNo! I know you can do it!

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    1. Haha, well, I only hope there'll be something worth reading by time I'm done butchering it. ;) And of course Errius is best - he's the first male character who's not an antagonist! ;)
      And good luck to you too, Lucy! :)

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