I apologize for being gone so long - I was celebrating my birthday this month and totally forgot that this blog was also (yay! Bloggie's two years old now!). Hopefully you can forgive me for my absent-mindedness once again!
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Echo
dismounted from his horse. He turned around a signaled his men. "Time to
camp," he said to them, getting his satchel out of the horse's saddle
pack.
At his
command, the other men in the party dismounted their own horses and began to
get their packs out. Some of them began to set up a camp. Good, Echo thought. Everything
is taken care of.
Echo opened up his satchel. He looked inside. There was some of Lania's bread inside. She had packed it for him, and put some of the fresh-baked loaf in there. Echo smiled. Now this was traveling food. It was certainly far better than what he usually got, which was also traveler's bread. But the real difference was that one kind reminded him of home, and the other only reminded him of the journey. Echo sighed a little, still smiling to himself. Soon enough, he would be home again.
Echo opened up his satchel. He looked inside. There was some of Lania's bread inside. She had packed it for him, and put some of the fresh-baked loaf in there. Echo smiled. Now this was traveling food. It was certainly far better than what he usually got, which was also traveler's bread. But the real difference was that one kind reminded him of home, and the other only reminded him of the journey. Echo sighed a little, still smiling to himself. Soon enough, he would be home again.
With these
thoughts in mind, Echo turned back to his men. The camp was all set up, and a good
fire was blazing in the middle of it. He walked towards the center of the camp.
Then he sat down next to the fire. Echo tore a chunk off of the bread from his
satchel and ate it. Then he put the rest back. He looked into the fire's
resplendence absently.
Then one of
his men sat down next to him. Echo looked over. "Hello, Evern," Echo
addressed the knight.
Evern
nodded. "Captain"
Echo smiled.
"It's Echo when we're alone, Evern. And aren't you hungry?"
Evern shook
his head. "I'm a bit unsettled about this journey, Echo. I've heard plenty
a thing about this robber band from some Nistrian travelers. There are supposed
to be a hundred score of them, so I'm told"
Echo
laughed. "You listen to travelers too much. If there are a hundred score
of them, then why has no one before gone after them?"
Evern
shrugged. "You tell me, Echo. You're the one who's been in this area
before"
Echo nodded
and sighed a little. "Yes... But it's been a long time since I've had to
be here. The last times I was here it was for a mission"
"And it
is so once more"
"Yes..."
Echo looked off into the distance. "But in particular, we're going to a
place I haven't ever been to for a mission"
Evern looked
over at Echo. "I thought you'd been there before?"
Echo nodded.
"I have. I was there about fifteen years ago, back when I was a infantry
man in the war"
Evern
laughed. "Has it really been that long?" He shook his head. "It
doesn't seem like the war was that long ago, does it?"
Echo
shrugged. "Well, in all hopes, it will be very long before any such thing
ever happens again"
"That
could be accomplished, so long as Nistria would be compliant"
"Well,
they'll have a new king soon enough, so that may help things, Evern"
Evern
nodded. "And I've heard rumor that Ingrecia is considering an alliance
with Nistra, which would also help things"
Echo looked
back at Evern. "Really? What kind of an alliance?"
Evern shrugged.
"I have absolutely no idea"
Echo smiled.
"Well, you're the one who talks to travelers all the time - haven't you heard
something from any of them about it?"
Evern shook
his head. "Not a thing"
Echo
laughed. "Well, why'd you go and hear the beginning of the rumor if you
weren't going to have the decency to hear the end of it?"
Evern joined
him in laughter. "Well, you know, I cannot choose what I hear or don't
hear, Echo"
"Yes,
but you can choose what you begin to tell me and what you keep silent. Why did
you even tell me the beginning? You know I hate stories without an ending, Evern"
Evern
smiled. "Well, I'm no storyteller such as yourself, Echo. But at least all
of my stories are true, whether they ever are finished or not"
Echo
chuckled. "Was that jest a jab at my truthfulness, Sir Evern?"
Evern
shrugged nonchalantly. "Perhaps. But if you have a story to tell, it often
is one, well, of your own fancy"
Echo shook
his head smilingly. "I at least finish my little fairytales, which is
better than having an unfinished real event to tell"
Evern nodded
in defeat. "I suppose so" After a moment of silence, Evern just
laughed. "We are rather ludicrous knights, now aren't we, Torriven? All
we've done since the camp was up is discuss foreign politics and storytelling,
when we have a mission five days ahead of us"
Echo
shrugged. "You forget that you were the one who started both of those
so-called ludicrous discussions, Evern. And the mission is ahead of us. We have
not reached it yet"
"Yes, I
know, but surely we must put some measure of focus on it?"
Echo
laughed. "You are the ludicrous one really, Evern. We went over it when we
were in the town" At Evern's comical expression, Echo laughed again.
"Don't worry, Evern. I was only jesting. Believe me, I have been thinking
about the mission"
Evern nodded
and stood up smilingly. "Good, because I don't want to follow a distracted
captain into a mission. I mean, it wouldn't be quite ideal to follow an
absent-minded knight, who's only constantly thinking of his little village and
little family the entire mission, would it, Echo?" And with this, he
promptly left, still smiling, with a hint of sarcasm in his tone and
expression.
Echo merely
burst out laughing. Evern knew him perhaps a little too well...
What did you think? Any critiques? Comments? Suggestions? I would love to hear any feedback, especially since this story's now being prepped for longer roads, so speak your mind!
Haha, oh they're cute. I love Echo. :) And dear me!! Has it really been two years since this blog's maiden voyage?? Happy blogoversary!! *throws confetti, rice, and kisses*
ReplyDeleteThanks! I'm glad you liked Echo, because I'm having some second thoughts on this guy... like many of these messed-up people, lol... :P
DeleteYep! Thanks, Megs! Probably wouldn't have existed without you and yours, though!
*pant pant* So sorry I haven't been around lately.....things have gotten CRAZY around these parts it seems.
ReplyDeleteAhhhh yes! Glad to get back to Echo. I like the way that the conversation flows between him and his captain, it feels really natural and comfortable.
Wonderful job, Belle!!
P.S. Expect a present in your inbox within the next couple of weeks :)
Whoops, almost forgot. Happy Blogoversary!!!
DeleteNo problem! I myself have been pretty busy as well (although, I imagine it's a lot busier studying/working/farming than hopping to and fro from choir to a production of The Music Man).
DeleteThanks! *wicked smirk*
Ooooooh - yay!!!
Oh, thanks, Catherine! Thanks for supporting the blog!