I must apologize once more for my absence as of late - busy, busy, busy have these times been, and yet, it's the beginning of the summer! But, I shall make it up to you. Hopefully, I shall have a nice recovery here and start posting again more regularly. Until then, I suppose I shall just give this next part of Anwynne's tale to hopefully momentarily satisfy. Also, hopefully you will enjoy meeting the final POV character in this part.
The other parts may be found here below:
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"Errius?,"
Elystra's small voice rang through Errius' thoughts like the saving sound of a
church bell.
Errius
turned to face her. "Yes?"
Her fair
face was in a doubtful and somewhat confused expression. She bit her lip, as
though hesitant to say what it was she had roused his attention for. "Errius...
I - I... How long will it take us to get to the river road?"
Errius was
quite sure that this question had not been her originally intended one, but he
was silent on the matter nonetheless. "It will take us about the rest of
the day and a bit of tomorrow. Once we find the river, it will be a day's
travel to the first village. From there on, it will be a lot faster,
though"
Elystra
nodded, but did not speak again. So they both trekked on.
Errius
looked at Elystra. He pushed a branch out of his way. How he wished he could
have spared her this journey, and that she could have just been warm and comfortable
at the Nistrian palace already. By now she could've been too, if not for the
unseen complication of bandits. Errius hadn't know that there were so many...
Otherwise he would've advised the king to build the host for force rather than
stealth. And now, because of this mistake, his poor little sister was trooping
through the woods at his side, probably very fearfully.
The hours
passed in silence, and soon the sun was low on the tree-ridden horizon. Errius
looked over at Elystra. She looked weary. Her dress was torn, her steps were
becoming ever slower, and there were shadows under her eyes. Errius took a deep
breath. It was definitely time to set up a camp. He stopped, and looked around.
Elystra
glanced up at him. "Errius?"
Here is a good spot. Errius faced Elystra. "We're stopping, Elystra.
We've been traveling all day without a rest. We'll stay here for the night, and
then once morning comes, we'll set off for the river again"
Elystra
nodded, and sat down. She looked down at her hands. After a moment, she laid
down on the forest floor.
Errius
looked around. There had to be something he could do to make her at ease... She
wasn't used to tracking paths outside the lights of civilization... not like he
was. Errius felt his belt. He didn't have a satchel, he didn't have a sword,
and he didn't even have a knife. He didn't even have his cloak anymore. Errius
clenched his fist, and sat down. He hadn't wanted it to be like this for her.
He had to have something. It was cold
out, it was in the middle of the woods, and neither of them had eaten. Surely there must be something to help any
one of those things...
Errius felt
inside his jerkin. Suddenly his hand came upon something hard and small. He
took it out. The princess's bracelet.
It was indeed her bracelet. A small, silver ringlet, delicately fit for her
tiny wrist. Errius examined it gently. It had an inscription on it in Ingrecian.
They were only the words of Anwynne's royal house, but hopefully they would be
enough for the Nistrians.
Errius held
the bracelet out in his palm. He looked down at it and nodded. I promised, Princess. I'll come back. I gave you my promise. And I intend to keep
it. He held it tight, and pressed it to his face quietly.
All of the
sudden, a moan came seemingly out of nowhere. Errius looked around. Elystra was
moaning, and moving in her sleep. Errius stood up, and walked towards her.
Then Elystra stopped moaning, and sat up. Her
cheeks had tearstains down them, and she looked worried. "Erry!" She
turned around frantically until she saw Errius. "Errius... oh..."
Errius sat
down next to her, and looked into her face. What could be wrong? "Elystra,
what's wrong?"
"Errius,
I..." She looked down. "I've had a dream... With a face... And I
thought it was just a dream, but then, back at the bandits' cave...." She
turned her face up to Errius, worry shining in her silvery eyes. "And I
saw the face. There, at the bandits' cave, I saw it again... And I thought that
I'd just imagined it up..."
Errius
stroked her face with his finger worriedly. "Who, Elystra? What
face?"
Elystra's
eyes shone with fear. "I don't know! I kept seeing a face in my dreams,
and somehow vaguely remembered it, but I thought I made it up because I didn't
know it... But the bandits' cave... Errius, the bandit's captain - I've seen
him before! Both of us have, I think... I knew the face..."
Errius
furrowed his brow. How could such a thing be? Neither he nor Elystra had ever met
the bandit captain before... "Elystra..."
"I know
it sounds mad, Errius, but I know we've seen him before! His face is familiar
to me... I just don't know how..."
Errius
looked down. The bandit captain..? But,
then when they'd been dueling, Errius had almost thought the same thing... that
he had seen the face somewhere before, in the vague realms of the past...
***
"Angelo," Marcina called for her brother, knocking
upon the large doors of the throne room. "Angelo?"
Marcina opened one of the doors cautiously and stepped in.
She looked around the throne room. Sitting upon the throne was Angelo, gazing
distantly out with an unreadable look on his countenance. It wasn't exactly an
unusual sight. Marcina sighed.
Marcina stepped forward, walking up to the throne upon which
Angelo rested. "Angelo? What are you doing?"
Angelo's gaze remained distant for a moment, but eventually
centered on Marcina. He almost looked surprised that she was there. "Cia?
What is it you wish for?"
Marcina smiled a little in spite of herself. "I asked
you what you were doing, Angelo"
"Just thinking... that's all, Cia...," Angelo
trailed off, starting to look distant again before he shook himself. He smiled
a little, as though to reassure her that nothing was wrong. "Is there
anything else you wanted, Cia?"
Marcina attempted to ignore his distance in mind. She smiled brightly
and gestured out the door playfully. "Why don't you walk in the garden
with your sister before you're crowned king and you have a thousand score
duties?" She laughed a little. "Instead of having only a stiff,
grumpy regent for company?" She looked up at him hopefully, still smiling.
Angelo glanced out of the window nearest the throne. Then he
looked back at Marcina. "Cia, it's raining"
Marcina looked outside. It was indeed raining. Oh, fiddlesticks. She hadn't thought of
that. "Well, then, ah, why don't you walk in the halls with your sister
instead?," she queried hopefully.
"Is that what you want, Cia?"
Marcina sighed. "I suppose so, yes" Oh, why could she never think of a good way
to speak to him? It was just so frustrating!
Angelo smiled ever-so-slightly. "Then I shall... at
least for a little while"
Marcina frowned. "No, don't if you don't want to,
Angelo..." She crossed her arms disappointedly. "We can just stay in
here"
Angelo nodded. "If that's what you want, Cia"
Oh, honestly he was so frustrating! Somehow, there were times
these days when Marcina didn't know what to think of Angelo and his doings, or
how to even speak to him. He had become so distant
in the past few months. It almost always seemed as though something was
wrong, but when she asked him, nothing ever was. He kept to himself, he kept to
his room, and the throne room seemed to be the only other place he ever
frequented. And he never showed preferences or pleasure for anything anymore,
not even around Marcina. Just however she
liked it, or just whatever she wanted
to do. Well, Marcina knew that this was only gentlemanly behavior, but she was
getting sick of it! She just couldn't read him anymore, and it bothered her.
But, relentless of however reclusive Angelo chose to be, it
was not in Marcina to be the same way by any means. So she sat herself down in
the chair right next to him. She began to tap her fingers on the arm of the
chair, as was often a habit with her.
Eventually, she plucked up enough boldness to speak again.
"Angelo?"
Angelo turned to her, breaking from another distant unknown
reverie. "Yes, Cia?"
"You know, you're going to be married in less than three
weeks" Maybe this was what was upsetting him. Marcina would just watch his
reaction to see.
Angelo nodded slowly. "Yes, I am"
Marcina bit her lip frustratedly. "Aren't you excited,
though?"
Angelo smiled at her. "You know very well, Cia, I never
really thought about it very much. I suppose, though, I best begin to do
so"
Marcina smiled. "Yes, I'm afraid you must... otherwise
you'll be a rather poor husband!"
Angelo didn't reply. He seemed to grow distant again, and his
smile faded softly. Was the subject of his upcoming matrimony, then, what had
been so keeping his thoughts? Perhaps...
But then, for a moment, he almost had
seemed happy about it... Then maybe it was in association with that...? Marcina
just didn't know... And she couldn't bring herself to ask him. But then, maybe
she would have to... An unanticipated streak of courage surged through her.
Marcina would know what was putting her brother out of sorts, or else forever
give up trying to.
"Angelo?," she spoke again, her voice shaking a
little. "Please tell me what's the matter... You haven't spoken three
words for days, and have spent so much time alone - or with Lord-Regent Orvond"
Angelo smiled, if a little sadly. "Is it so apparent
that something's wrong?"
Marcina put her hand over his and looked up at him.
"No... Only to your sister"
Angelo sighed. "I am worried, Cia. But perhaps I am
merely being ludicrous in my worries" He smiled, and squeezed her hand gently.
"Yes, I'm just being worrisome. No need to distress yourself for one of my
follies, Cia" With this, Angelo got up. He looked back at Marcina, and
held out his hand. "Perhaps now you would let me have that walk with my
sister you spoke of?"
Marcina sighed, still disappointed that he wouldn't let her
in. But, nonetheless, she smiled back at him, and stepped forward to take his
hand. "As you wish, Angelo"
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What did you think? Perhaps you are relieved that there are no more surprise POVs coming? Or perhaps you're thinking there are already too many...? :P Any comments? Critiques? Suggestions? I love any and all critique of any kind, so please chat with me!
I love this multi-POV structure - it gives it a wonderful omniscient feel to it, which is of course my favorite :)
ReplyDeleteI like that we see the Nisterian POV too - glad to see that they are just as concerned with the story as the other characters.
Catherine
catherinesrebellingmuse.blogspot.com
Thanks! I've always loved multiple POV setups - the more, the merrier!
DeleteYeah, originally, 'twas not the case, I assure you...
Heehee, at long last I begin to catch up on this wonderful story--and finally meet Marcina! I must say, I like this girl. "Oh, fiddlesticks. She hadn't thought of that." That was...exactly something I would do...
ReplyDeleteHaha, well, she is your character after all! I hoped you would like her!
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